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#1 Bnm

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Posted 13 February 2014 - 09:02 PM

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Tell me what you think....and lol the reason this is depressing is because that's what I am right now...

#2 Zora Marslink

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Posted 13 February 2014 - 09:06 PM

Well...it will certainly destroy you if you don't know how to handle it. Though I disagree on one point. True happiness does not come from yourself...

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Posted 13 February 2014 - 09:08 PM

I said it is FOUND not come. It means that only a few lucky people can be truly happy.

#4 Zora Marslink

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Posted 13 February 2014 - 09:11 PM

Well...everyone is capable, but not everyone does.
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#5 Michigander1

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Posted 13 February 2014 - 09:13 PM

Travel to Detroit. Maybe you'll have a new perspective on life

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Posted 13 February 2014 - 09:28 PM

Do you guys like the poem? :(

#7 Zora Marslink

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Posted 13 February 2014 - 09:30 PM

It's decent.

Edit: Just so you know I had a long lecture from my father on how most of modern poetry is not true poetry (referring to high school poetry) and aside from that I never really liked poetry so my opinion isn't really the best one...

#8 Kondor Kanyon

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Posted 13 February 2014 - 09:40 PM

The first line was interesting. The other lines just made it a sob Story

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Posted 13 February 2014 - 10:13 PM

All of that's true, unles you do something about it

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Posted 13 February 2014 - 10:43 PM

If you have depression problems, you should join Depressiontribe.com! :P It'll help!


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#11 Michigander1

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Posted 14 February 2014 - 03:13 AM

We should all make poems and post them here, that would be fun

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Posted 14 February 2014 - 03:22 AM

We should all make poems and post them here, that would be fun

 

I agree.


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Posted 14 February 2014 - 06:08 AM

It is very sad :(

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Posted 14 February 2014 - 06:38 AM

Hey Eden Rock3t don't try to help Bnm. He told me point blank that he never wanted it. He is right about one thing; life is hard. You get what you give. If you give your all; only then will you receive all. If you give little; in return you won't get anything. Dreams are mans illusions of escaping to a distant world not filled with lies. I personally like the mood in the poem. Not every poem has to be all happy. Without evil there is no good. Without sadness there is no happiness.
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#15 Zora Marslink

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Posted 14 February 2014 - 06:40 AM

"Without evil there is no good."

 

I disagree with that.

 

Explanation:

 

Proper phrase: If evil does not exist, then the opposite, good, must also not exist. This is true.

 

What is not necessarily inferred from above reasoning of opposite entities is the statement:If evil is not present, then good is not present. For existence in any circumstance is not questioned, but only a certain circumstance is.


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Posted 14 February 2014 - 04:41 PM

I may not be a therapist, but I can help someone if I want to!


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#17 Michigander1

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Posted 14 February 2014 - 05:14 PM

Ill write a poem right here, exclusive.

Hope is a false illusion
What does it mean?
Hope defies probability
Hope lifts the weak over the strong
The less over the more
The dumb over the strong
And what does it mean?
What compels the weak,
To challenge the strong?
Hope, or ignorance?
Ignorant people challenge because,
They don't know they're weaker
Hopeful prepare challenge because,
They know they're weaker... and...
They do it anyway.
What is hope?
Blind recklessness.
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Posted 15 February 2014 - 06:12 PM

What happened to "Eden forums" being about eden, it may as well be called face book as so many ppl just talk about how bad their lives are and how sad they are.
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#19 Michigander1

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Posted 16 February 2014 - 03:44 AM

My life isn't bad. I just wrote a satirical poem to make a point. Now I don't understand what you don't understand about "anything goes". Without this sub forum I would be bored to tears on this forum! I would only go on to ask how to make palm trees and such! But this sub forum has made me meet new people and experience this forum even better

#20 Zora Marslink

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Posted 16 February 2014 - 04:06 AM

My life isn't bad. I just wrote a satirical poem to make a point. Now I don't understand what you don't understand about "anything goes". Without this sub forum I would be bored to tears on this forum! I would only go on to ask how to make palm trees and such! But this sub forum has made me meet new people and experience this forum even better

 

Well said.

 

Also to note: Just because a person writes a miserable poem doesn't mean the person is miserable. It is (at least for me) much easier to write a negative poem, though I can honestly say I'm not a miserable person.






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